second song which I write. please comment this song.

I was lonely
By : lingkan b marvina

through the day without you by my side
you live far away there, I live far away here.
I want to go to where you are
but it was just a dream for me.

Reff :
I'm lonely without you here
without you beside me
My life is very lonely
no color in my life is
if you're by my side forever
it would be so colorful

when I get to see you babe
when you will come visit me babe
We can joke together here
through it all together



reff :
I'm lonely without you here
without you beside me
My life is very lonely
no color in my life is
if you're by my side forever
it would be so colorful

if you were here I would hug you tight
if you always my side always I'll take care
I'll hold your hand tightly and I'll never let go of that hand.I am afraid that if you go from me
Don’t go away from me babe

My life is very lonely
no color in my life is
if you're by my side forever
it would be so colorful
if you're by my side forever
it would be so colorful